Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to your penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

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Dear Becky, My English teacher has introduced

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you and told me that you are looking for a penfriend. Let me introduce myself. My name is Yan and I'm currently working as a technician in one of the overhead crane companies. I'm looking for a penfriend too. That's why I'm writing

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to you. Let me tell you my personal interests and hobbies and activities I like to do the most when my free time. I like jogging and hiking so I usually go out at weekends to the parks and recreation centres wherever it suits me to do my favourite activities. Normally, on weekdays, I seldom go out after I back from work and I spend my time reading because I find that reading is a kind of relaxation. I hate swimming and doing exercise at the gym. Sometimes, I play football with my old schoolmates.

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football is my favourite childhood sport, nowadays, I am doing very less on that. I think these are enough for you to know about me. What about you? If you don't mind, share with me your interest in sports and activities. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Yan

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Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to your penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

The two plans show Pancha village in 2005 and 2015. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.

People are staying more and more at home, these days. What are the causes and effects.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart details average daily sales by total number of servings at a restaurant according to season.

Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?