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Write a letter to colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. Describe the presentation Why was it important How did it help you ?

#colleague #book #presentation #work
I hope I find you well.I am writing
this
 letter to express my gratitude
with
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the book that you lent me. As you know I was given an assignment about
importance
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 of media and how it would help our
company
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 sales.I am in the marketing industry now and it seems to be a bit challenging task.Our company has invented a new product and we have to get the public
know
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 about it and increase its sales. My presentation was of success,I could clear give prons
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an
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 cons for media and explain
further
 how it would assist us from now on.
I
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also
 helped me come up with the suggestion for us to try online advertising
,
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since TV advertising is expensive nowadays. My boss was happy with my presentation,it was the best of them all .I was promoted to be the leader of the
markerting
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marketing
 team. I am so happy with my achievement and I hope to
continue
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 be of use to my
company
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 success. I hope to see you soon,please come visit on weekend , will be off work.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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