Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. agree or disagree?

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some

people

believe that money is a great motivation, that can cause enormous changes in peoples’ lives to use less personal cars and reduce the amount of traffic and

air

pollution,

however

in my opinion

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increasing the price of

petroleum

cannot cause a significant change in the lifestyle of

majority

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the majority

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of

people

. The reduction of traffic and

air

pollution is dependent on many factors

such

as

petroleum

’s

quality

and if we still are using cars

which

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are driven by

petroleum

or we have replaced them with e-autos. In a developing country

such

as Iran, fuels

with

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good

quality

are not accessible despite the fact that we ourselves sell crude oil to many countries of the world. In

this

case

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the

government

should wonder

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if the

petroleum

price should be increased or its’

quality

. Using renewable energies for vehicles or driving e-

autoes

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instead

of using

petroleum

is an incredible move

through

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sustainability,

however

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we should

first

notice

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if the

government

could provide

the

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suitable infrastructure or not. Building power stations for e-autos

in

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the roads and cities and allocating enough budget for renewable energies and e-

autoes

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autos

auto

are some of the examples in

this

reference. In conclusion, each decision that the

government

makes has a considerable impact and it coordinates the

behavior

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behaviour

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of

people

, in order to provide fresh

air

and prevent

air

pollution by reducing heavy

traffics

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traffic

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. So the

government

should

instead

of increasing the prices provide

people

the

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suitable infrastructure and

life’s

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quality

and

then

ask for

people

’s cooperation to have environmental friendly habits.