Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Zoos
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have been around for over a couple of decades, you either love them or loathe them. Recently,
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, people have started questioning their quality of care and value. Personally, I feel
zoos
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are pointless, cruel and ought to be phased out.
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,
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have greatly improved in their infrastructure, the condition and climate the captive
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are kept are deplorable. Polar bear,
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, travels several miles of ice daily and yet, in some tropical regions are kept in small pens with little pool of water for relief.
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discomfort, zoo
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can suffer
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of being kept with unfamiliar and unrelated cage-mates. Not to mention, the noisy crowds of people that visit the zoo. In terms of conservation, while
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can assist in the preservation of endangered species, these efforts are ultimately futile. The Sumatran tiger,
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, being endangered species has been successfully bred,
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, have been reared by humans captive population has lost its natural instinct to hunt, avoid humans and raise its young.
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, it will be impossible to re-introduce these creatures into the wild. Not only there is a loss of instinct but there is a loss of habitat to consider. Urbanisation, logging, industrialisation, and farming all contribute to the destruction of habitat.
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means that even if the captive-bred population of pandas or tigers was ready to be released, there is, in fact, nowhere left for them to go. In conclusion,
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may be able to keep the captive
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alive but their quality of life is poor and
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' future prospects are bleak. Efforts should
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be made to preserve wilderness areas for the long-term survival of the species.
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