In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crime committed by young people in large cities. What has caused this? What solution can you suggest?

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of
crime
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last
year's
crime
rate
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increased
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rapidly
in
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among
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youth
generations who live in large cities.
This
essay
contain
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some reason as well as some solution which I will discuss in
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the upcoming
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paragraphswith
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paragraphs with
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withe
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with
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the causes which produce
crime
rate
in
youngster
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the youngster
a youngster
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.
Firstly
,
youth
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the youth
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generation
divert
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from
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advertisement
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advertisements
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. To explain it, some social media sites and
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television
program
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programs
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who
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apply
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showthe
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violence
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movies as well as videos which put
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a negative
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impact on
youth
. Which is the main cause of today's time. Apart from
this
, lack of
education
is
a
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one major cause of
crime
.
Parents
are not aware
about
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of
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their
children
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children's
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education
because they have no time during their job. Which put
negative
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a negative
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impact on
children
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future life.
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conducted
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by
crime
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the crime
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branch of
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, 70%
youth
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of youth
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are in
crime
cause of
unawerness
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unawareness
frome
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from
their
parents
.
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, these are the major causes
which
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increse
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increase
the
crime
rate
in
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among
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the youngster
a youngster
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youngster
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.
In contrast
, there are some solutions
regarding
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this
statement.
First
and foremost,
government
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the government
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should ban influence television programs as well as some
violenc
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violence
violent
adds
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ads
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which encourage
to
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youth
to do
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the crime
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crime
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crimes
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. Meanwhile,
government
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the government
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should apply
new
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the new
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rule
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rules
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and
ragulation
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regulation
regulations
regarding
the
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apply
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crime
.
Withthe
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help of
punishment
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,punishment
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they will fear
from
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crime
.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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should provide
better
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a better
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education
system which
provide
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provides
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awerness
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awareness
about
crime
.
Lastly
,
parents
should take care of their children and provide
better
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a better
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life with the help of
education
.
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,
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a survey
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conduct
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conducted
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by
education
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the education
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department of Canada 90%
youth
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of youth
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have
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better
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a better
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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with the take care of their
parents
.
As a result
, these are the suitable solution to reduce
crime
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the crime
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rate
. In conclusion,
although
, there are
lot
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a lot
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of causes
show
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shown
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in the field of
youth
crime
but
suitable
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the suitable
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solution can
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be hold
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this
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situation.
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