In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crime committed by young people in large cities. What has caused this? What solution can you suggest?

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is increasing day by day in some nations.

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generations who live in large cities.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

308 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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