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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for some ne to teach their two children your language for a year

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Dear Mr and Mrs Frank, My name is Anita Gilbert, and I am from Poland. I am writing
this
 letter in response to an advertisement, published recently in a popular newspaper, in which you have sought
for
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a Polish
language
 tutor in order to teach your
children
 the
language
. I think that I would be a very suitable candidate for
this
 job, mainly because I have a
Bachelor
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 degree in Polish literature. I
also
 have taught Polish to
children
of
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8-12 years of age for almost 3 years which has allowed me to learn a great deal about the behaviour of
children
 and what motivates them to learn.
Besides
, I can
also
 be a very friendly person with enough patience to deal with
the
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children
 of any age. Apart from helping your
children
 learn the Polish
language
, I could
also
 be of assistance in looking after your home and
children
 when you are away. By the way, I want to have
this
 job as it will help me a great deal when doing my
Masters
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 degree in Australian and Aboriginal studies
next
 year. I hope you will consider my skills and enthusiasm to let me teach your
children
 the Polish
language
. Yours faithfully, Anita Gilbert
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