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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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These days,
people
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 change their living
place
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 frequently due to various reasons.
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, in the past, they lived all their
life
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 in one
place
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. Even though moving from one
place
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 to another is quite expensive, I believe it is beneficial in the long run. The most compelling reason for changing the city where you
where you
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were born and raised is to find better
opportunities
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. Most
of
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the
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young
people
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 go to new places to acquire better academic qualifications.
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, some rural areas often do not have reputable universities.
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, students
move
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 to urban areas to complete their tertiary education. Not only youngsters but
middle aged
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people
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also
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move
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 to find better jobs and
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life
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 standards. In most
of
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the
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countries, better employment
opportunities
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 are concentrated in main cities.
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,
people
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move
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 to these places to uplift their living conditions. A number of benefits can be obtained from
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 trend.
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,
people
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 can expand their
horizon
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. Many
people
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 in villages do not have comfortable
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lifestyles
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life styles
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lifestyles
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 because of poor transportation facilities, schools, healthcare systems and so on. Once they
move
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 to a better
place
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, they can get a better
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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.
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, only distinguished cities have reputable universities as it takes a lot of effort to maintain high standards.
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, young
people
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 can most likely achieve academic success and develop their skills by moving out
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 their home town.
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, there are several merits to moving from
place
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 to
place
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. In conclusion, in recent years,
people
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 tend to change their living places to improve / enhance their career prospects. I suppose
this
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 is advantageous as they can acquire better education and career
opportunities
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 through
this
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move
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.
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, no one should be reluctant to change where they live when
opportunities
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 arise.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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