Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that
History
is one of the main classes in schools, but some people doubt that and think subjects like science and technology should be more important in modern life.
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own
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opinion. On the one hand,
History
teaches us about the past and makes
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the student
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student
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students
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be close to their cultures. Learning
history
make
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pupils
to
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understand how their countries
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built and how their nations
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formed.
In other
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it helps to realise who they are. But in
modern
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the modern
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world when everyone is tolerant, no one cares about
others
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races and identities.
On the other hand
,
history
gives nothing to develop cities and discover something new. And subjects like science,
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and physics
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can help students know how everything works. These classes can teach young ones how
phone
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was made,
how
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and how
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light
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the light
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was opened,
further
with
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knowledge youngsters have an opportunity to create anything. Knowing the past will not make
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to live in the future, so people have to know about recent things. In conclusion, I do admit that knowing more about
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culture is important, but I think caring about our future and
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what we have is more important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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