Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions.
It is considered by some
people
that they should tolearate
the unfortunate events Correct your spelling
tolerate
such
as getting an unfavourite job or not having enough money, while there are others who consider that it is necessary to find the ways to counteract those bad situations. This
essay will discuss both side
and give the writer's perspective with detailed explanations.
On the one hand, it is obvious that there are terrible situations in life that Change to a plural noun
sides
people
cannot accept. Take the people
with below average
family Add a hyphen
below-average
background
Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
for example
. Those people
cannot change the fact that their families cannot support them as much as other families and so they cannot afford to get the
qualified education Correct article usage
a
which
can lead them to achieve Correct pronoun usage
that
the
better job opportunities. Correct article usage
apply
As a result
, they have to accept the unfavourite career since they have little chance to choose the one they desire.
On the other hand
, it is important for people
to try to seek for the
solutions to deal with those imperfections in their life. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, a poor but hardworking student can achieve the full scholarship that let him take the major he has always wanted. Consequently
, he can acquire the
career path which matches Correct article usage
a
with
his passions. A great number of well-known Change preposition
apply
people
from different fields, whose parents are blue-collar workers can also
be taken as an example.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are
some Change the verb form
is
situation
that Fix the agreement mistake
situations
are
totally related to Change the verb form
is
luck
of each person and some of them can be corrected with the Add an article
the luck
effor
and strong commitment. I believe that we have to accept the bad things that we cannot change but still have to find paths to overcome those difficulties in order to achieve Correct your spelling
effort
the
better lives.Correct article usage
apply
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