In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Hard-working has always been considered a virtue to the point that some people give
children
the message that they will have everything they want if they try hard. Use synonyms
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inspiration is both beneficial and harmful.
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children
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belief. They tend to be raised as assiduous and studious adults. Linking Words
Subsequently
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For example
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instead
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also
helps them to grow responsibility due to the fact that they are in charge of whom they become. Linking Words
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, prompting them to do their best to achieve what they want usually results in more success.
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On the other hand
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work
. There are situations in life where it does not matter how a person strives, he/she will not accomplish anything. Use synonyms
Children
who are told the other way may feel disappointed and lose their confidence in these cases. Use synonyms
Consequently
, depression will be inevitable. Linking Words
For instance
, a child possibly quashes swimming if he/she cannot pass the test in spite of the hard Linking Words
work
while there are abilities that are difficult for each person, regardless of desire and effort.
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