Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you dsicovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: Where and when you lost your bag What your bag looks like What its contents were

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform
about
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the loss of my handbag.
First
, let me introduce myself, my name
AI
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Zein Al Chami and I have
traveled
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from London to Vancouver with
British
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a British
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airline
last
Wednesday. Whereas I am attentive, I forget my suitcase on the
airplane
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on Wednesday 5 May 2022.
Although
My seat number was 13 B, I put my bag in
the
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space 15 since I did not find
free
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place to put it in the one provided for 15. Here are the details of my briefcase; it is navy blue
color
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, its brand is Adidas with the logo in white on both sides.
In addition
, it has a handheld holder with an extra-long shoulder support to facilitate its carrying. The contents of my pack were variable, mainly personal stuff which contains some clothes and shoes.
Furthermore
, the most precious item is the gift that I bought for my parents as a souvenir from my trip. /
Furthermore
, the most precious item is the camera that contains all my moments spent there. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated. Faithfully yours, Mr Zein Al Chami
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