you have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student. write a letter to the newspaper to publish an advert: - describe your apartment and the facilities available - what kind of tenant you would prefer -when you want the advertisement to be published and have you would pay the free.

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Dear madam, I am writing

this

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letter regarding publishing an advertisement related to the

tenant

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in your newspaper. I have a large apartment nearby the national college and one extra room which is fully furnished and attached with a bathroom and

also

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a fully equipped kitchen is available so, a

tenant

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can cook their food own.

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, It is situated beside the bus station and the college is nearby

the

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flat.

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, many people want to be a

tenant

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and are ready to pay a reasonable rent for it but, I approach only learners to rent it , so in the

future

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I did not face other issues related to payment.

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, I

also

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want a calm, polite and obedient person as a

tenant

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because there are many children living in other rooms and he should be no smoker

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Finally

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, I want to publish

this

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advertisement on the

first

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page of your newspaper on a Monday morning and mention the contact details and address of the Apartment perfectly. I

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pay your fees by credit card be on time. Yours faithfully, Hemal

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

183 words

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