you have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student. write a letter to the newspaper to publish an advert: - describe your apartment and the facilities available - what kind of tenant you would prefer -when you want the advertisement to be published and have you would pay the free.

Dear madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding publishing an advertisement related to the
tenant
in your newspaper. I have a large apartment nearby the national college and one extra room which is fully furnished and attached with a bathroom and
also
a fully equipped kitchen is available so, a
tenant
can cook their food own.
Moreover
, It is situated beside the bus station and the college is nearby
the
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flat.
Moreover
, many people want to be a
tenant
and are ready to pay a reasonable rent for it but, I approach only learners to rent it , so in the
future
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I did not face other issues related to payment.
Furthermore
, I
also
want a calm, polite and obedient person as a
tenant
because there are many children living in other rooms and he should be no smoker
also
.
Finally
, I want to publish
this
advertisement on the
first
page of your newspaper on a Monday morning and mention the contact details and address of the Apartment perfectly. I
also
pay your fees by credit card be on time. Yours faithfully, Hemal
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