Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?
Over the years, some types of wildlife are on the verge of becoming depleted
while
others are almost dying out. The two major causes for Linking Words
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trend are overexploitation of their natural habitats and illegal hunting. Linking Words
However
, technology and regulations are possible solutions to Linking Words
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problem.
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Firstly
, Human activity is a major cause of the destruction of habitats. Humans need land for the expansion of agricultural land and the building of houses. Linking Words
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degradation
of national parks to pave Correct article usage
the degradation
way
for construction infrastructure is inevitable despite contributing to the displacement of creatures and reducing the food available to survive, Correct article usage
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thus
, increasing the risk of dying out.Linking Words
For instance
, the world's largest bat migration has been affected after cutting down trees(natural habitats) to pave Linking Words
way
for the construction of a road. Correct article usage
the way
Therefore
, displacement of fauna. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, to counteract Linking Words
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problem, The World Linking Words
wide fund
for Correct your spelling
Wide Fund
nature
can help by instructing its member countries to set aside national reserves where human activities are prohibited.
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Nature
Secondly
, poaching for selfish reasons is a major contributing factor. Some individuals believe in myths that creatures have medicinal, aphrodisiac and religious values. Thence, prompting them to acquire Linking Words
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scarce resource to satisfy heart desires. Linking Words
For example
, an elephant tusk is believed to cure mental illness. Linking Words
Hence
, the killing will contribute to the extinction of wildlife. Linking Words
On the other hand
, tackling Linking Words
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problem requires both individual and government efforts. They can help in raising awareness against the killing of fauna for unproven reasons and Linking Words
encouraging
poachers to seek professional help. By doing so, different species will be saved.
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To sum up
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degrading forests and illegal hunting negatively affect the animal Kingdom Linking Words
nonetheless
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can be reversed by creating national reserves and raising awareness.Linking Words
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Provide a more detailed analysis of the reasons for the depletion of wildlife and the solutions to the problem.