Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir, I am Karthi and located on 8th Street, Rajendra Nagar. I have resided here for over 8 years and which is covered under your local council body. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that share my opinion about closing the sports and leisure centre in our location.
First
of all, When we come across
such
news and my family feels really sad. The centre was very famous for its sports gatherings and we spent most of our weekends time there. Not only us, most of our local folks frequently visited there and spent their idle time as useful. As for my concern, centres like as we have presently must be created in all locations. They are not only giving sports, but they
also
create social relationships with people. They make unity in our society.
Lastly
, if
such
centres are closed in terms of money perspective,
then
there is no
such
place for interacting with other people in
this
faster world. Generally, people are more stressed and feel depressed with so many things. They should need a place to get themselves relaxed and involved in other activities. Thanks for your consideration and hope good response from your side. Regards Karthi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure centre
  • foster social bonds
  • physical health
  • mental well-being
  • constructive activities
  • accessible
  • exercise
  • community spirit
  • public service
  • anti-social behavior
  • cost-saving measures
  • vital role
  • recreation
  • negative impact
  • forecast
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