Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although
,it is argued by some certain set of individuals that employees should appear smartly in dressing while others strongly disagree that the level of work output should be above body appearance.Linking Words
This
essay will discuss both sides of the Linking Words
views
with great points.
On the one hand,there are several rationales why workers should dress smartly.Fix the agreement mistake
view
Firstly
,it brings about respect to the institutions.When a staff dresses good, Linking Words
people
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tends
to accord her some dignity.Change the verb form
tend
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The
way
you dress will determine the Use synonyms
way
you will be addressed.Use synonyms
Secondly
,Linking Words
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coordination
co-ordination
and unity Correct your spelling
coordination
becomes
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become
top notch
in the facility because the Add a hyphen
top-notch
way
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a
staff is been looked Remove the article
apply
will
make them Change preposition
at will
to
be rendering care in a uniform and effective Change the verb form
apply
way
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
,it promotes the name of the company in the sense that individuals outside the horizon will be talking good things about the sector.Linking Words
For instance
,researchers have reviewed that the reason why companies prosper in their businesses is because of the Linking Words
way
workers Use synonyms
appears
to the consumers.Nobody wants to be attended by an Correct subject-verb agreement
appear
unkept
person,so for that Correct your spelling
unkempt
reason
all employees should Add a comma
,reason
endeavor
to dress decently.
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endeavour
On the other hand
, because of the financial instability in the country,some Linking Words
people
cannot afford the funds to purchase outfits Use synonyms
especially
in a facility where they pay little wages.So they try to promote the organization Add the comma(s)
,especially
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by
buy
using what they Correct your spelling
by
they
have Remove the redundancy
apply
that is
by working very hard, effectively and diligently. Linking Words
Consequently
, when a worker put in his efforts in a facility,it increases the output of the company because some Linking Words
person's
do not regard an outward appearance Change the noun form
people
person
at
the major strategy but Change preposition
as
rather
much concerned about what the person will bring to the table. Add a missing verb
are rather
For example
,research carried out in Australia Linking Words
2009
reviewed that the cause of Change preposition
in 2009
increase
in output was a result of Add an article
the increase
an increase
effort
of the Add an article
the effort
an effort
people
working in the sector.Use synonyms
Therfore
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Therefore
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our
out look
is not pivotal in any establishment but the contribution the Correct your spelling
outlook
people
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renders
matters Correct subject-verb agreement
render
alot
.
In conclusion,I firmly believed that Correct your spelling
a lot
out look
is very paramount because it brings about Correct your spelling
outlook
honor
to the sector,togetherness and love and Change the spelling
honour
lastly
,it builds up the fame of the organization.Linking Words
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