Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it cause serious pollution and use up the world fuel resources.to what extent to do agree or disagree

It is often urged that flights should be put to limit to reduce pollution and uses a lot of oil.To a lesser extent, disagree that flights should be put to a limit.

Air

travel is a mode of

transport

. Nowadays because technology improvement ,people are travelling by

air

.

This

is because it is a fast mode of

transport

and it saves time.

Air

travelling is the only mode of

transport

that can be used to travel when you are travelling to other continents .Through technological advancement ,gases from

from

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the flight can be reduced depending

to

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changethat

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oil they use.They can use

a

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fuel

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is friendly to the environment.

On the other hand

, I agree to a greater extent

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air

travel should be limited because it causes

air

pollution .The emissions of gases from flights are absorbed by the atmosphere and it causes Global warming .It causes diseases,drought ,water scarcity and extreme heat.

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threatens

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human life.More diseases are created because of

air

pollution

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example, respiratory illness .Extreme heat is

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climate change,heat damages crops ,creates diseases and reduces water sources by evaporation.

In contrast

, they use a lot of fuel resources because it travels long distances. In my opinion ,I think ai

transport

should be put to a limit because they cause

air

infection and it is harmful to people's health and to the environment.

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, it

bring

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income to the country's economy. In conclusion,departure should be limited to reduce infection and

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save the world's fuel resources.