In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is unfathomable to imagine life without fresh and clean
water
.
Water
pollution – caused by men – is a serious and prevalent issue, which not only causes
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but
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of
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water
that leads to a global humanitarian crisis.
Third
-world countries like Africa, Afghanistan and Liberia do not have easy access to clean drinking
water
. Residents living in these countries have to collect
water
directly from creeks, rivers and lakes. During the summer season, especially in deserted areas, people have to travel afar to collect
water
from the well; and on some days, the well has already dried up by the time they reached there.
As a result
, family members passed away; children who have not yet fully lived their lives are deprived of the chance to reach their maximum potential. To resolve
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have to step up their roles and think of solutions to alleviate
this
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Firstly
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could partner with
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countries and do a trade exchange so that they could buy
water
at a cheaper rate.
Secondly
,
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could build a
water
desalination plant where
water
can be reused and treated using reverse osmosis technology.
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could pass stricter bills and heavier fines for people who are caught polluting the
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in the country. Implementing these measures would help alleviate the shortage of fresh
water
and more people would have ready access to pure and clean drinking
water
. In a nutshell, everyone has a role and responsibility to play in ensuring an unpolluted and clean environment. We have to learn to work with one another to make sure that human lives will not be compromised
as a result
of our irresponsible and ignorant actions and behaviours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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