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People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

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, many
people
 who live in the cities are facing numerous problems in daily life
such
 as
health
, living space and traffic. To start with, many
people
 live in the cities due to the chance of occupation and quality of life,
although
 there are drawbacks in many ways. The rise of
population
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affect
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 the conditions of air as
people
 are using vehicles and resources which pollute the community.
For instance
, New Delhi(
capital
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 city of India),is one of the worst air quality in the world despite the lack of space and increasing of
people
.
Furthermore
, all of these affect the physical
health
 of
people
 in general because of the air and community that are suitable for
people
 to live in.
Furthermore
, to solve these problems are necessary for the government to take part. The improvement of some areas rather than the capital or tourist visit province should receive enhancements as
people
 are able to live there. The decreasing number of
people
 in the cluster can improve several living conditions
such
 as
health
 because
the
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 reduction of traffic as well as the abundance of resources
which
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 are enough for the community.
Therefore
, if the government can improve smaller regions, it would enhance several lives to have
better
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place
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places
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 to live. In conclusion,in my opinion,I think that every region of the country should
be improve
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 in order for
people
 to live in as it can improve living quality and satisfaction among the population.
Therefore
,
people
 would have a good life with
an
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excellent
health
.
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