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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

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The advancement of technology has made it possible to hold big projects like searching
life
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 on other planets. Even though,
people
 argue that the money spent on these works should
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 for solving
people
's difficulties. I actually do not agree with the statement completely. In
this
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i
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 will note down my
corcern
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concern
concerns
 and provide my extent of agreement.
First
 of all, at some
stage
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 it is
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quite
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quiet
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 obvious for
people
 to
concern
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 about their issues not being solved.
For instance
- in recent times of covid-19 lots of
people
 had to lose their loved ones due to
lack
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 of sufficient hospital apparatuses.
However
,
people
 were
oblieged
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obliged
 to die
infront
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in front
 of the hospitals. If there
was
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 sufficient sources,
i
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 think more
people
 could have been saved. So, according to me, folks are right about their worries.
Secondly
, on other hand, it should be a proud moment for the public to know that officials are trying to make life possible other than just only on Earth. I think they should support
government's
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 efforts. It is unlikely to
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said
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 that authorities fail at every crisis though it is very well known that emergency funds get used
anormously
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enormously
anonymously
 in case of disasters. I believe, there are some times when governments need
public's
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 supportive hands too. To summarise, in my
opinion
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 officials and
public
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 should work together to lead a better future and to deal with issues. So, I am not in a favour of
any one
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anyone
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 party rather
i
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 would prefer collaboration to tackle all the problems strongly and to celebrate big achievements by authorities.
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