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some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hardwork and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #sport #ability #hardwork #practice
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sport
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. There is always a debate on the key factors of
success
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one
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 is natural
ability
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 and the other is the
ability
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 to
work
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 hard and doing
practice
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 as much as possible. Let us discuss more in detail
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the two opinions
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, I would like to discuss hard
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 and
practice
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. These are the important aspects of
success
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 because nobody knows anything by birth. We start learning as we grow older so even though you don't have any natural
ability
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 to get
success
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 in the
sport
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 you can achieve it with your hard
work
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. As we are all well aware of the saying
practice
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 makes a man perfect, with
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continuous effort we can learn anything gradually.
Firstly
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, I would like to discuss hard
work
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 and
practice
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. These are the important aspects of
success
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 because nobody knows anything by birth. We start learning as we grow older so even though you don't have any natural
ability
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 to get
success
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 in the
sport
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 you can achieve it with your hard
work
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. As we are all well aware of the saying
practice
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 makes a man perfect, with
the
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apply
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continuous effort we can learn anything gradually.
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 hard
work
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 and
practice
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 play a key role in our
success
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, if we had a natural
ability
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 to perform well in the
sport
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 It would be a great advantage. So when choosing a
sport
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 to play we could give our priority to the
one
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 where we can give our best naturally. I would like to conclude
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 and
practice
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 play a major role in
success
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.
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