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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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In the modern world, technology is increasing sharply. One of the consequences is that
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 we use technical apparatuses
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 of our potential. In my opinion, there are more advantages than disadvantages of
this
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First
 of all, one of the advantages is that our chores are relieving day by day while machines are raising nowadays. A lot of technics have been entering our
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 since the
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 century. Almost all
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technologies
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 have changed
electronic
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version
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For example
, laundry apparatuses , gas stoves or cleaning
equipments
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 can help us to do something.
As a result
, we manage
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 time and energy that we spend
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 chores. New machines are very easy to learn correctly.
On the other hand
, people are
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 new technologies that can help to do our jobs.
As a result
, we rely
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 them than ourselves.
Moreover
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 responsible
are being working
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 lazily. In conclusion,
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technical apparatuses are a part of our life. I think that these machines only help to spend less time.
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