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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #smoke #places #people
Recently, smoking in public areas is restricted in numerous countries. While some
people
complains
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 about the strict rule, some cheer for the regulation and find it is fair
this
 way. I personally agree with the latter to a great
extend
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.
First
 of all, it is undoubtedly that smoking does damages to human
bodies
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. Not only the ones who actively
consum
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consume
 cigarettes
,
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 but
also
 other
people
 in the surroundings that passively
breath
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 in the smoke would be affected.
Although
people
 who smoke on purpose might be aware
off
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 its negative effects, and willing to pay the price for several minutes of relaxation and enjoyment, it is extremely unfair, to force others in the room to take in the toxic air spontaneously.
Therefore
, smoking in public places, especially in a closed space,
such
 as an office or a studio, is
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potential harm to other
people
's health.
In addition
,
although
 cigarettes might be attractive to some, the smell of the smoke is
unplaesent
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unpleasant
, even repulsive, for some others. Once the smell
get
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 absorbed by hair, clothing, or other textiles, it could
stays
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 for a whole day long and it is hard to get rid of it. For
people
 who are not a fan of cigarettes and cigars,
this
 is a nightmare. In conclusion,
somiking
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smoking
soaking
 in public
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dose
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does
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 not only hurt other
prople's
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people's
 physical health
,
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 but
also
 their mental state.
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Therefor
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 I think it is fair that public smoking was made illegal in some countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondhand smoke
  • respiratory problems
  • cardiovascular disease
  • clean air
  • public health
  • hospital admissions
  • economic benefits
  • smoking cessation
  • cultural shift
  • healthcare costs
  • smoke-free laws
  • enforcement
  • designated smoking areas
  • compliance
  • social attitudes
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