Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In
this
present-day world, it has to be said that the urban areas have to build bigger outdoor public areas rather than other constructions Linking Words
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as roads,bridges and buildings for improving public Linking Words
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by doing Use synonyms
exercise
and workouts in public Use synonyms
places
.Due to changes in lifestyle,people prefer to sit and sleep than doing Use synonyms
exercise
.Following Use synonyms
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, a great many of them have heart disease,obesity, diabetes and hypertension.In bygone days, most of them were doing farming when they had a shortage of money;and, that helps them to maintain physical fitness.I agree with Linking Words
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notion and Linking Words
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essay will enunciate my agreement in detail with appropriate examples.
To commence with, it is indeed an irrefutable fact that public Linking Words
places
like parks and playgrounds can improve social Use synonyms
health
and Use synonyms
happiness
.These days, cities and towns are facing land shortage problems for housing and infrastructure due to urbanisation.So most of them live in a small Use synonyms
area
and do not have sufficient place to do Fix the agreement mistake
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exercise
and work out to maintain their body.In the light of Use synonyms
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situation,constructing public Linking Words
places
are very imperative to help people to do workouts.Use synonyms
For example
, a study was conducted by NIT,Mumbai about lifestyle diseases and the importance of warmup exercises to avoid Linking Words
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.The result shows about 80% of the Indian population has diabetes,heart disease and obesity and 20% of them die because of Linking Words
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.
To continue, it is paramount to consider a person's mental Linking Words
health
Use synonyms
also
.If the government built a large public outdoor place, people can do Linking Words
exercise
and get Use synonyms
happiness
from work-outs.To elucidate Use synonyms
further
, if they do Linking Words
exercise
, their brain will release a chemical called endorphin which helps to maintain our energy and Use synonyms
happiness
throughout the day.Use synonyms
For instance
, a recent article published by WHO about work-outs and Linking Words
happiness
.It was about brain functions after every Use synonyms
exercise
session to improve our Use synonyms
happiness
.
In conclusion, it has been proved that building public outdoor Use synonyms
places
improve public Use synonyms
health
and Use synonyms
happiness
by doing Use synonyms
exercise
in that place.That would be eradicated lifestyle diseases Use synonyms
such
as diabetes,heart disease and obesity.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite