In the past when students pursued a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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days,
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were pursuing a graduate degree in their native place.
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, in present days pupils have a lot of opportunities to
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pursue
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nation. In
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I will discuss both positive and negative aspects of development.
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advantage of studying in abroad is that
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will get advanced knowledge.
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, the information they acquire keeps them up to date and makes a better citizen in
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feild
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field
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, it brings
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satisfaction
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, the pupil
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handful
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of practical skills. It enhances the area where they are gifted and drives
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to their
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life. On other hand, there are
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downsides
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studying abroad.
Home sick
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is one of the major
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students
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face. Especially,
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reminiscing
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every
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with parents, siblings, make them
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feel alone and sometimes leads to depression and anxiety. Another difficulty they face is language barriers. Communication is
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art to express
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and opinions of
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. Inability to explain and
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share leads to lower
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. In conclusion, studying in foreign places has its own merits and
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demerits
. Graduating in a new atmosphere with various costumes might inculcate new things and
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better
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citizen. On
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this
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may
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affect the
students
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seperated
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separated
from their loved ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International job market
  • Cultural exposure
  • Intercultural communication
  • Higher education standards
  • Specialized programs
  • Language proficiency
  • Financial burden
  • Homesickness
  • Mental health challenges
  • Recognition of qualifications
  • Bureaucratic challenges
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