It is widespread that many teenagers have smartphones. I do not think that
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of
this
outweigh the drawbacks.
The main reason is that
this
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youngsters.
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than 3 or 4 hours can affect
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brain significantly.
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plenty of
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related to
this
issue. Conclusions of these
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for
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generation, especially for school
children
whose age are at 8.
For example
, if kids explore
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day they would be more
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, without any energy to play outdoor games
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can lead
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health problems.
Furthermore
, dedicating much time to using
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can be harmful
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children
's creativity,
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to solve simple tasks.
For instance
, my nephew,
, has used
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for 3 years and,
as a result
, he is one of the worst pupils at school.
However
, there are
also
some merits of using
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device. It can be used as a helpful item for
. If
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are being
how to manipulate it in the right way they could find beneficial materials.
Moreover
, in the age of
and the Internet,
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early
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.
This
knowledge should be
by parents. As well as
this
, via the Internet
children
can gain extremely important information for study
In conclusion, I totally disagree with
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that
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of owning
phones by
children
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outweigh
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.
However
, it can be used
when there is a parent's control.