«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»
I think both are equally important. Because even the best athletes were ordinary
people
until they reached that level. They bring glory to the people
. it helps to gain respect in the eyes of the world. So it is very important to invest in the training of athletes. And for ordinary people
, it plays a big role in maintaining a healthy lifestyle. Almost the city lacks open spaces for sports. This
means that the population needs special facilities for sports, and this
should not be ignored. In summary, sports facilities are very important for both athletes and ordinary people
because they help them exercise and be physically active. I think the government should use the budget wisely for the benefit of allSubmitted by khushnudrustamovich on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
