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There are more cars on the roads this days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. what do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do this outweigh the advantages?

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Nowadays, a number of cars on the highways and many accidents are happening.
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,
of
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few
politicians
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 have said that individuals must to regular driving
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test
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tests
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 for all of
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their
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them
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the
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life
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, not only one
test
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. I think regular
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test
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havenot
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have not
 advantages rather than disadvantages. To start with, if
people
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be take
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 regular driving
tests
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then
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 they aware about the vehicles and roads and
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 transport types.
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, if individuals take the different types of
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 and visit
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a new places
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then
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 they carefully drive and
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knowing
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 about the roads, traffic area and
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rules
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the UAE
government
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lead
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 to a strict transports
licence
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 issue. They take
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first
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four
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time
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test
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 and after give a
licence
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 so there
is
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 a few accidents cases.
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government
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 should announce
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strict
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then
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people
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 follow them.
that is
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 a must important for us.
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, in
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 Era,
people
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 had
a
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no
time
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 in their busy
life
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 so if they take
a regular driving
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a regular driving test
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tests
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then
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people
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 lost their
time
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, money and
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 sometimes job because of irregular
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 with their work
hour
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.
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, if the individuals went to take
tests
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 more than one
times
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,
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 they hate
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driving of the
life
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 due to reason of
they
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life's
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problem
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problems
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 like timing, job and
family related
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.
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, in
the
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India,
government
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 announce the
rules
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 in 2019, related
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licence
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to licence
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people
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 who
are pass
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 8th standard and above only
they
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take a driving
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tests
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test
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 and issue the
licence
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 on
the
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a
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 computer basis.
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, many
people
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 try to 5 and more
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time
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times
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 but they missed the
licence
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 and lost their money or
time
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. To conclude, I believe that more
time
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 of driving
test
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 is disadvantages rather than one
time
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 so I saw my point of view
government
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 should announce
a strict
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strict rules
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rules
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 related to the transport and licences, And
people
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 must follow
this
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 rule so they save money,
time
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 and
also
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 their lives.

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