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Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future, with countries gradually joining together into larger units. Write an essay expressing your opinion about this topic and support it with arguments including: • lower taxes and prices associated with being part of a free-trade area; • ability to travel freely between countries to live or work; • how countries modernise and influence one another when they join together. (Word limit: 200-220 words)

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The model of the European Union
is
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 the future and all the
countries
 must participate in it. Can you imagine a world without borders where all of the people live, work and travel without any problems? There are a lot of benefits which can be gained if
this
 happens.
Firstly
, fees would be lower.
For example
, supermarkets will decrease the prices of their products, because of the cheaper taxes which they pay for the export and import. By doing
this
, all of the people will have access to buy things which they need.
Secondly
, travelling from one to another country will be free of charge at the borders.
For instance
, people who need to go to the other country to see their friends, because of their jobs or just for pleasure, will not pay for
this
. In
this
 way, visiting relatives from abroad will be easy. Another positive aspect of a union is the influence that
countries
 will give each other.
For example
, developing
countries
 will follow the examples of developed ones. Governments could exchange ideas, build roads and buildings and will interact with each other. All in all, I firmly believe that larger units like the European Union will increase the relations between
countries
 and will help for a better future.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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