It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The improvement of health care systems and

humans'

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lifestyle

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have increased

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life expectancy around the world.

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, the tendency of couples to have one child due to the twentieth-century financial difficulties

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resulted in a decrease in

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population. So, population ageing is expected for the future generation. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that

this

phenomenon has its own two sides;

however

, I believe that its disadvantages overweight its benefits. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my notion.

Firstly

, countries' industries are

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by the young generation. Youngsters have helped countries to remain the

countinuity

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continuity

of industries.

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, in a company, strenuous positions are

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with young and powerful employees while old workers are

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positions with lower physical activity

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, which contributes to the company's survival.

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, fewer young human resources

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to companies'

bancruptcy

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bankruptcy

and financial predicaments.

Secondly

,

elderlies

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have always been viewed as a group

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needs

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great attention.

This

volnurable

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vulnerable

age-group

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requires more social services than the young generation.

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, the

prevelence

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prevalence

of medical conditions is much higher in them, which can put more pressure on

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healthcare system.

In addition

, the dependency of elderlies on younger people is irrefutable.

Therefore

, by ageing, not only will not enough caregivers be available in future but

also

more nursing houses will be required, which causes

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burden for governments. To sum up, the disadvantages of population ageing

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greater than its advantages. I believe that a subsequent decline in human resources to execute careers and more financial budget that a government needs to protect old people negate all benefits.