n many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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, youngsters are On fleek obesity and Deleterious . Many individuals believe that the authority should have Liability.Actually , I am partially Acknowledge

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paragraphs There is no doubt, over fat is the biggest issue for

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immensity good level of fast food like burgers pizza, shakes and many more others.According to the Health expertise department

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of people

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worldwide having body overweight problem

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month and it is rapidly increased among them. After that, while working and

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for eight hours built the tummy fat , the main reason is no movements of human structures constant hours. The latest example of online classes and work from home. On the other

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is of opponents frequently contended that government should take action

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overweight and unhealthy Diet .

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, whatever the reason is they should do mandatory subject related heath and foods in the universities , colleges and schools

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more they should ban street food places from the cities and town

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Children could not force their parents to buy that unhealthy eating.

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, the governments should allow only the healthy stuffed on the street that would encourage the children to have healthy. To summarize my all ideas , both parents and government should take initiative for their kids and upcoming nations to stay healthy and eat great.