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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #technology #rate #crime
There is no doubt that
technology
 is changing the routine of our
life
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 rapidly. Some people believe that
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cutting-edge
technology
 can avoid and abate the rate of committing
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an offence
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offence
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. I completely agree that modern
technology
 helps us to reduce the rate of criminals. Even though there are
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abound
of
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the solution
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solution
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 to cut down the number of lawbreakers, I will consider
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only the two key technics in here. ​
Firstly
, in my opinion,
surveillance
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 camera is the most effective way to reduce the biggest
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 of events that are related to
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outdoor crimes.
In addition
, I believe that if people have any impression
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that CCTV is always observing them, it could be affected
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their mental why cannot get involved with scandals.
For instance
, according to
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, after
Chinese
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 government had been implemented
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surveillance cameras
in
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 public streets and along roads in several
region
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, they really surprised
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 number of crimes that have dramatically fallen. As
result
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 of the project, they have been installing
the
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million of
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the camera
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camera
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cameras
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 in other regions. Another key point is to trace the
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smartphone
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smart phone
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 for individuals.
Smart phone
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manufactures
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 and cellular mobile operators should provide the information requested by law enforcement and the police.
This
 will not only support
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the detection of any crime,
however
,
also
 make a significant contribution to its prevention. To conclude, there is no surprise the police can use the surveillance camera and the trace and log for mobile
phone
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 to detect a crime as well as
preventing
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 them. In the future, as mentioned
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above
technology
 solutions will be more effective if
use
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 in combination with artificial intelligence.
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