Some people sat that family is the most powerful influence in a child's development. Other's say that other factors such as (Television, friends, music, etc.) play a greater role today. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are a lot of

factors

that

affecting

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affect

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a child's development. A few of them are Television,

friends

, family and

music

.

Although

, a few of them have more positive results with less amount of negative impacts. I will discuss in detail all the

factors

in the below lines.

Firstly

, the

children

will learn everything from the environment where they have been raised. So, the family traditions and culture will definitely influence their

thoughts

. If they grow up in a family with a charming atmosphere their ideas related to activities in life will

also

develop in a good manner.

On the other hand

, if the family is busy fighting all the time about money-related issues and they gave preference for who is right or who is wrong rather than discussing the reasons for certain situations, the

children

also

think in that

way

only. So, the family will always play a major role in the development of

children

.

Secondly

, the type of community we are living with

such

as

friends

also

impact

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impacts

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our views. when we are surrounded by positive mindset people our

thoughts

will

also

be like that only. So, we should be careful while choosing our

friends

.

Music

has a great

impact

on processing our

thoughts

. when we hear some good melody we will be relieved from stress. People often use

music

to relieve themselves from stress. Especially, we prefer the kind of

music

based on our emotions. So

music

has an

impact

in a good

way

and

also

in a bad

way

because when we are sad we prefer

tolisten

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to listen

sad

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to sad

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songs that will make us even sadder so use

music

wisely. As a co-cultural activity, we would allow

children

to learn how to play musical instruments which will improve their skills. Coming to the Television the type of shows we are watching has a great

impact

on our lives without knowingly.

For example

, if we watch an inspiring life story of a person we will get some good

thoughts

that will be useful for our future or if we watch a sitcom it will make us laugh which is good for our health. In

such

a

way

if we gave preference to shows that will telecast domestic abuse or crime in front of

children

that will create unnecessary

thoughts

in them which are not good for them. I would like to conclude with my opinion of

the

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that

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family plays a key role in

children

's growth because Television,

music

and

friends

are the external

factors

that we choose depending on our mentality. If we have raised our

children

wisely they will use all those

factors

in a good manner only.