In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In many nations, some argue a large amount of

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should be allocated to build new

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lines

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while others indicate improving the current public transport is a better option. In

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essay, I will discuss

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views and argue that constructing a transportation system is preferable.

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with, constructing new tracks for very fast trains between cities entails

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positive and negative outcomes.

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of all, when fast tracks are

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built, the hours spent by commuters going to work from their place should be reduced and productivity would increase.

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, they can work more effectively and take a better rest in lieu of spending their

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meaninglessly on trains.

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, making new

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lines

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would require a plethora of

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, which means governments should make a sacrifice for other public services

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as public education.

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, renovating pre-existing public transport engenders

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beneficial and detrimental implications. As opposed to creating new

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lines

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, it would not require as much

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or

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, which means governments need to spend

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only on fixing or replacing some parts of railways.

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, existing transportation systems will have to be replaced by new ones in the future as they will be obsolete and outdated. To replace old and malfunctioning tracks, a countless amount of

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and

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will be necessary. To sum up,

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the construction of new

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lines

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and the renovation of existing transport systems bring about

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benign and malign effects.

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, given that the harmful effect caused by updating the current system outweighs the one by building new ones, I believe

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should be allocated to build new

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lines

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