You read in a newspaper that a company is going to renovate some school buildings in your local area that are in a poor condition. You would like to offer your help. Write a letter to the charity paying for the renovation.In your letter ● explain why you want to help with the renovations ● suggest what you can do to help ● say when you are available to start work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in your school buildings

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project in my local area. I have found

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information in my newspaper

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morning and it would be a great honour for me if I can offer my help in your project.

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, I work as a manager in Star

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company and it has been over 10 years working with

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firm so I have gained some good experience in the

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department. I can help your company in making new

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designs and I can get you the best material that you can use for the renovations. I got a grip on making building structural designs and I hope my experience can be useful for your work.

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, I am available from the following week as I will be done with my meetings and I can give you my best time for

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amazing project. I will provide you with my contact details when we talk

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time. Please don’t hesitate to drop me a line if you need any more information from my end. I hope to hear from you very soon. Yours Sincerely, Pat Cummins

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

198 words

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