A friend of yours moved to a new home recently and you would like to send him/her a present for the home. Write a letter your friend. In the letter, • Describe the present • Tell him/her why you chose this present • Explain how you would like to deliver the present.

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Dear Raj, Hi! Hope you and

family

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your family

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are in good health and happy about moving to your new house.

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week. I got you a very nice present and I am thinking you will like it a lot. I know you like

coffee

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and I got you a Mat chef

coffee

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maker from Walmart. It is grey in colour and can make ten

cup

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cups

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coffee

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one time. It is not very big it is like 15 inches in height and has anti drip option. I checked so many things and

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I decided on

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as you spend too much money on

coffee

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every morning. Now, you can make it at home and save some money. I will bring

with

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it with

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me when I am coming to help you to set up the house

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apply

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this

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weekend. I

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keep the receipt safe so we can test it and if you are not happy we can change the gift at Walmart. See you soon on Saturday! Yours loving, Guru

Toni RThu Apr 07 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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