In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Today's technological advancements with modernizing life so develop. In the
future
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the majority of employees will be replaced by robots or automation. That technology will
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transportation in the form of
driverless
vehicles.
Although
this
technology is convenient and trendy
but
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I believe it has more drawbacks than advantages.
Firstly
, we can observe that the infrastructure and
traffic
in many countries still do not allow for the integration of
this
technology.
For example
, Vietnam has a very complicated
traffic
system with a wide range of vehicles participating in
traffic
, people passing through red lights, people crossing the street unexpectedly... There are always
traffic
jams with a massive and crowded number of motorcycles, so the
driverless
car's sensor mode will not recognize and work perfectly.
Secondly
, if
driverless
cars become more common, it will create a problem in society by displacing driver
career
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such
as
:
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taxi drivers, container drivers, Uber drivers...
This
issue will become more prominent in terms of employment, as well as other issues related to the environment, health care, taxes... Many people,
in particular
, have been driving for a long time and find it difficult to find another job. In conclusion, while
driverless
vehicles can be useful in some situations, their disadvantages are more obvious than those mentioned above. The most important thing, in my opinion, is life safety.
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