People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions ?

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Nowadays

people

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hardly know their

neighbours

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and In my vantage point, I do agree with the fact with

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trend the healthy communities are falling apart at an alarming rate,

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is not the case in the olden days and there are many factors affecting

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trend to grow drastically in negative over the years. To start with, One of the significant reasons would be seeing the

neighbours

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with an intention that they are strangers and if they share anything with them they might take an advantage of them .

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asking

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too often and taking their valuable time with unnecessary chitchatting sometimes when they are not in the mood to talk.Another good reason could be

people

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are generally shy and hesitant , so over the years they really get habituated with an attitude of not taking to others

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especially

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people

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who live around them.

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,having a busy work life and

inapproatiate

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inappropriate

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quite common these days is

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hindering the opportunities to talk with

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door

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tenants

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. As a consequence of

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acculmated

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accumulated

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effect, of not interacting with the

neighbours

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, the development of

community

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the community

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is getting

effected

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negative pace ,since it can only

will

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flourish with interaction , sharing and caring of others .

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people

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not only often feel like, they are lonely but

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they are less communicative to

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and

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psychological problems as they

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up being lonely .

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growing problem can be fixed with

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greeting to their

neighbours

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even though they

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initially

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know each other as it breaks the ice and provides

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room for interaction to start with.

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, Inviting them to their houses for any events

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as birthday parties, wedding anniversaries could

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too to build the friendship and to flourish

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into a beautiful

commounities

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communities

as more and more common friends and families will join in

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proecess

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process

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, Offering a little bit of help when needed

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could be anything like giving hand when their car

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in snow sort

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simple things make big difference. In conclusion,

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are always be

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our future friends , so

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very important to give a chance to interact who are trying and to

resiprocate

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reciprocate

so that beautiful friendships happen that could

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to build

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the

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beautiful and joyful communities .

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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