In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The advancement of land transportation has made us realize that all vehicles will be auto-pilot. It means that there will be no drivers anymore. Well, I think
this
automation will bring more issues rather than positive feedback.
Although
the advancement of technology has made us realize that there are some occupations that can be replaced by robots.
This
situation will push the
next
generation to develop a new way of thinking.
Therefore
, many
people
around the globe hone their skills and improve their knowledge by taking courses online that lead to other opportunities that can’t be replaced by Artificial Intelligence. That's why in today's modern world, there are a lot of new variety jobs
such
as YouTubers, TikTokers, crypto miners, gamers, etc.
This
is how younger
people
are trying to survive in the
next
decade. The side effect of
this
automation vehicle will be that many
people
will lose their jobs. Many drivers will be unemployed and the worst thing is they will do anything to survive in
this
environment.
For example
,
people
will be brave enough to commit a crime so they can eat and survive. The government has to take action to prevent
this
situation from happening. They have to limit the usage of automation so that if one day the system is down,
then
there are certain
people
who can perform it manually. It concludes that all human labour can’t be replaced by systems because it will bring a major problem for humanity and unfavourableness to human society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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