In many countries, Government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. Others think the government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is much controversy over money that governments should spend on

arts

. While some people believe that

arts

deserve governmental attention, others argue that

health

and

education

are two entities

which

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require more

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attentions

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Although

it is widely accepted that

arts

have played important roles in keeping countries'

cultures

, I believe

health

and

education

should be located above all. The following essay will overlook both views which are proceeding with my opinion. On one hand,

arts

have always been viewed as

undettachable

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undetachable

parts of

cultures

, which carry out countries' histories and beliefs to the

next

generation.

For example

, by reviewing graphics that were found carved on stones in Iran, ancient Iranian cultural ceremonies were revealed after hundreds of years and now people are trying to hold those ceremonies again.

Thus

, for keeping

cultures

safe, authorities are expected to dedicate enough budget to

arts

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the arts

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On the other hand

,

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proper investment in

health

and

education

is required for a society to survive.

First

of all, people should be healthy unless they could not enjoy their lives.

For instance

, the necessity of a good

health

care system felt more than

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any thing

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during

Covid

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pandemic, even though governments tried hard to provide different virtual art programs to

entertaine

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entertain

entertained

the public.

Moreover

, for a community to improve in the twentieth century, an educated young generation is needed to compete with others. To illustrate, many developed communities like Canada have been updating their educational systems

continuously

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to nurture a better generation and remain a developed country. To sum up,

arts

can not be neglected because it is rooted in

cultures

and is a way of transferring it to the future population whereas

health

is the most important entity that can overshadow other things, and

education

is a fundamental pillar that makes a community. I believe that governments should address

health

and

education

before

arts

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the arts

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