Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies or interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, employers often ask
people
looking for jobs for personal information
such
as their favorite
entertainment, the things they like in their free time and whether they are married or single,… Change the spelling
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Although
some people
believe that this
information
can be useful for employers, others including me would argue that this
information
should not be asked.
One disadvantage of asking for personal information
is when an employer is biased towards some people
because of their religion or hometown .This
cause
injustice in the Change the verb form
causes
workplace
and even cause
a clash in religious beliefs . Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
this
in turn
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, in turn,
cause
discouragement in Change the verb form
causes
workplace
and can have effects on Add an article
the workplace
people
’s health . For example
in my country , when I went to do a job interview, the interviewer asked me about my religion. Although
I did not know the motive behind the question, since I had aminority
religion I did not feel well.
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a minority
minority
people
think that asking for information
could be useful for employers, as they understand the personality types of their future employees .As a result
, they choose them in the sections that are matched with
their personality. Change preposition
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for example
, if we ask for
someone’s free time activities and they tell us that he like sports, we can recognize that they are quite active and suitable for a section that needs active personnel Change preposition
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such
as mechanical jobs. However
, competence and being versatile are most important in the workplace
. Furthermore
, some people
do not like to share their personal information
with others and to prefer
keep them secret.
In conclusion, in my opinion, asking for personal Add the particle
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information
is likely to cause
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