International travel is becoming coming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh disadvantages?

Travelers

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enthusiast

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are taking

advantages

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to explore different

countries

because of

low cost

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expenses as well as numerous

nation

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nations

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are giving

opportunity

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opportunities

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in welcoming massive tourists. I do

believed

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that

merits

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the merits

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of

elevated

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number of

tourism

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tourists

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outweigh its drawbacks. I will explain my opinion in the ensuing paragraph. On the one hand, the vast majority of

aviation

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industry offers

cheapest

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airfare for them to pull back the plummeted status of their company; numerous nation

are

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widely

open

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their doors to entice visitors from different parts of the globe. The reason for

this

is to recover the loss of

economy

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revenue due to the pandemic that have had

occured

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occurred

.

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, in Korea, the government promotes

manifold

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of tourist spots

destination

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destinations

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to attract people in exploring excellent areas in

such

a way they could obtain high

economy

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income tax return that will tremendously help their country.

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,

this

spectacular merits to the

countries

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economy

will help both airlines and different

nation

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.

On the other hand

, those aircraft that

offers

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discounts and promos

has

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a great significance to the public since extra money will be

utilize

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on other commodities

at

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in

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their households because

air fare

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airfare

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is less

compare

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before

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.

Likewise

, the pros of inviting people to different host

country

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countries

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will

benifit

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benefit

and introduce to

traveler

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travelers

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their local made products that may boost their tourism industry.

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as

,

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apply

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a gamut of travel

explorer

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explorers

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have been going to

Zwitzerland

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Switzerland

has an

oppurtunity

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opportunity

to purchase their local handicrafts which may help the

native

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to have extra income and it has

an

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tremendous effect to grow their

economy

.

Hence

,

lowcost

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low cost

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airfare and opening the tourist spots in different

countries

will greatly contribute to the total revenue of both industries and

economy

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the economy

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. In summary, scanty amount of money in paying

travel

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for travel

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and widely opening of different

countries

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countries'

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doors to the