In some places, old age is valuable, while in other cultures youth is considered more important Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of the controversial issues of a community is the average age of its people. Some believe that elders are more precious and essential than younger ones while others think exactly vice versa. Generally, a young population has many more benefits for the

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than an old

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has been proved in long term studies. In some countries that are rare indeed, executives assume elders have a lot of experiences that have been gained gradually from many years of hard work. They believe elders, as people who have spent their lives

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service to the community, must be front runners in all fields of a

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whose directions can lead youngers rationally. They prefer to leave many political, social or cultural posts and vacancies to them rather than giving an opportunity to youngsters in order to prevent any possible risks and their irreparable consequences.

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, a president of a country does not dare to select his or her cabinet from young candidates.

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, the majority of experts and social researchers imagine despite elder's valuable and sensible guidance, which is really respectable, we should regard their physical and mental abilities when they are getting

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that they are not powerful enough to do activities and work the same as what they have been doing already. Eventually, they become retired and turn into consumers only.

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occasion, governments are just charged to spend

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vast amounts of money for various facilities without any outcome in return.

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, using different types of health care services that are left to insurance companies.

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why they come up with the idea of advising people to increase the population in order to force the crowd to become an energetic

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in long term. In conclusion,

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both sides have their own merits, in balance the

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belief is more acceptable and

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and innovative population to thrust the community through the path

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many rivals in different fields

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as technology, politics, culture,…. We must regard that the outcome of

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despite risks is much more than the old

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