Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.* Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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been noted that numerous

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wildlife are endangered and many are on the verge of extinction.

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has been brought about by poaching and environmental

pollution

.

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, the possible solution to

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issues

are

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creating public awareness

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impact

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the impact

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of

pollution

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animals

and formulation of regulations against poachers.

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and foremost, the main

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of

this

problem

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pollution

of

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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which has contributed to climate

changes

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leading to drought.

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, causing death to a lot of

animals

. Another potential reason is

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hunting of wild

animals

. To

further

explain, it's mainly caused by people who participate in

unpermitted

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the unpermitted

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selling of wildlife products

such

as ivory .

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, in Kenya, the only remaining white elephant was found dead in November 2010 after being killed by

pouchers

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poachers

pouches

.

Thus

,

pollution

of the environment and poaching of

animals

are the main reasons for

extinction

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the extinction

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of various plants and animal species. On the other hand, the major solution to

this

issues

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is to educate everyone in

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society on the importance of protecting the environment from being polluted.

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will limit climate changes associated with ozone layer destruction and high temperatures. Henceforth increasing the life span

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living organisms.

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tight rules and means to protect

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this animal

these animals

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this

animals

from being killed should be implemented. It can be enforced by employing more trained game rangers and

also

installing

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electric

fence

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in the wild parks .

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, In Tanzania, a rule was passed that if anyone was found in the act of pouching

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or she will

be

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be sentenced

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sentence

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sentenced

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to death ,

as a

result

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such

animals

were protected from poachers.

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, by

controllin

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controlling

pollution

and setting up laws against hunting

are

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the preferred

approaches

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against

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burden In conclusion, the possible causes of wildlife extermination are environmental

pollution

and

illegal

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the illegal

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killing of

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an

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animal

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animals

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.Luckily , the issue can be solved by teaching human beings the advantages of conservation of

environment

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the environment

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to

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wild

animals

and making strict

law

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laws

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for

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those found poaching.