What are your post MBA/MSc/DBA/PhD goals and how do you think the program will help you achieve these

When I graduate in MSc International Finance from the School of Management at the Asian Institute of Technology, I set my goal to be a
. In the beginning, I have to get my real working experience in
or analysis of stocks from renowned
management companies for at least 2 years. After that, I will try hard to accomplish the Certified
and Securities Analyst (CISA)
level or
level of Certification. I have to pass the test of performance standards and ethics about being a
in order to get approved to become a
, from my perspective, I am strongly confident that if I graduated in MSc International Finance from AIT,
curriculum would help me achieve my objectives and become a
who is competent and ethical. In my opinion, In the
year of the program, learning about theoretical knowledge will help me assess an asset’s valuation accurately, understand the
, risk management and the impact of money on the society, politics and economics in micro and macro extent correctly. In the
year of the program, I deeply intend to attend exchange programs in other countries because
exchange program will help me broaden my intellectual horizon about the financial system of other countries. All in all, I think that exchanging financial knowledge with professors and classmates from other countries will help me enhance and keep developing my financial skills in order to accomplish my objectives in my life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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