In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?
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recent
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the recent
huge
number of Change the article
a huge
the huge
efficient
working class is migrating from Add an article
the efficient
less
developed Add an article
a less
nation
to more developed ones. There are numerous complications arising due to this
imbalance. This
essay will first
discuss issue
being faced due to Correct article usage
the issue
movement
of skilled Correct article usage
the movement
worker
and Fix the agreement mistake
workers
then
will focus on probable
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the probable
solution
for Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
same
.
Every Correct article usage
the same
nation
has professionals that can be categorised as low-skilled
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a low-skilled
worker
, mediocre and high skilled workers. It needs Fix the agreement mistake
workers
lot
of effort and resources for an individual to upscale himself from mediocre to Change the article
a lot
next
level. Correct article usage
the next
First
issue that arises from Change the article
The first
such
migration is loss
of great minds Correct article usage
the loss
for
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to
country
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the country
a country
on
which considerable investment is made. Change preposition
in
In addition
to that, this
loss has various cascading effects as well, it led to imbalance
in society. Due to Add an article
an imbalance
scarcity
of Correct article usage
the scarcity
appropriate
skilled worker companies has to manage with someone who is not capable Change the adjective
appropriately
for
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of
job
and it has Add an article
the job
disastrous
outcome. Products with compromised quality are made which Add an article
a disastrous
damage
the brand of enterprises.
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damages
Plausible
solution is to self-analyse the weakness and Add an article
A plausible
strength
and to take appropriate steps. Fix the agreement mistake
strengths
For instance
, developing
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a developing
the developing
nation
cannot afford to pay Fix the agreement mistake
nations
same
salary Change the article
the same
like
the developed Change preposition
as
nation
but they can highlight some of their merits, such
as abundance
of Add an article
an abundance
the abundance
job
opportunities. High skilled professional
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professionals
not
like to do Add a missing verb
do not
their
same Change the word
the
job
for a long time and job
switching is not possible that frequently in developed nations. Professionals may have to take a hit on the
salary but in lieu of Change the word
their
that
they will have more Add a comma
,that
job
satisfaction. Moreover
, its
observed that lifestyle in Replace the word
it's
it is
developed
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a developed
nation
is self-centric and people find it hard to take out time in working even in case of some urgency. So, Fix the agreement mistake
nations
developing
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a developing
the developing
nation
can promote flexible working hours and promote socialization.
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nations
essence
there are some benefits and challenges as well for migrating to developed nations and with appropriate strategies and perks Add a comma
,essence
to
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for
skilled
class, even developing nations can Correct article usage
the skilled
held
their intellectual mind.Change the verb form
hold
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