Currently, the
world
today is digitalised. Various
people
subscribe to social media to connect and interact globally with persons of different
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, gender, culture and customs.
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believe
this
technology separates individuals from reality. In my opinion, in as much as the internet, creates a platform for socialising, it is imperative for a balance between the physical and online life. In
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will be considered.
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cyberspace accords
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leverage on a variety of platforms.
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Facebook, Twitter,
, YouTube, Instagram, Pinterest ,
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messaging, just to mention a few. Connecting
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familiar and unfamiliar persons on
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simplified. Most
people
develop
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and likeness
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with strangers.
Subsequently
, couples are joined in matrimony, meeting themselves on a dating site. Someone lacking
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in the real
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can brace up to communicate with others.
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, diverse groups are established
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up of distinct characteristics and
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for like-minds. Globalisation has become possible. Businesses can be transacted from anywhere as
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is no longer a barrier.
For instance
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but can place orders for goods and services. Education is acquired through
this
means.
Furthermore
, computers, laptops, tablets and smartphones are man's best
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at the moment.
However
, with
this
trend, somehow,
people
get disconnected and distracted from the real
world
.
This
is so because, they build a fictitious existence on
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forgetting their responsibilities, respectively to the actual
world
. The usual day to day outings with family and friends has drastically declined. Face to Face
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, which is the basis for forming relationships and partnerships is gradually being replaced with social media
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.
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turn, leads some
people
to oblivion.
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shown that isolating oneself may lead to depression.
In other words
, victims suffering from depression, rarely communicate their problems to
people
,
they find solace on the net.
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,
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family members
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limited, family ties are fading by the day as more and more humans are withdrawn
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themselves but clinging tightly to online presence. Thereby neglecting community social obligations. Not contributing positively to the growth and development of the society.
With
this
in mind, having a balanced life online and
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life is healthier for everyone.
Conclusively, information and communication technology usage cannot be overemphasised. Respectively the natural
world
cannot be pushed aside.
Therefore
, it is crucial to have a steady lifestyle.