IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 3

Write an essay illustrating your career and the Background.

#career #background
I completed Electronic
Instrumentation
 Engineering Diploma in 2002 from Government Polytechnic in INDIA and started working as an
Instrument
 Technician. For the
last
 14 years, I have been performing the duties of an
Instrumentation
, E&I, and automation Designer or E&I Draftmsman in the Oil and Gas sector. I am an approved
instrument
 Designer from PDO. During the
last
 seven years in QP, I worked and became proficient in Qatar Energy Design Standards as I was involved in many FEED and MWR projects. During the association with these companies, I was involved in the preparation of
Instrumentation
, Hse & Telecom Detailed
/
As-built
Instrumentation
 Drawings and Documents, namely
Instrument
/
F&G Location Layouts, Cable
/
Trench
/
Tray Routing Layouts,
Instrument
 Equipment Room Layouts,
Instrument
/
ESD
/
F&G Cable Block
Diagrams
, Interconnection
/
Termination
Diagrams
,
Instrument
 Hook-up
/
Installation
Diagrams
,
Instrument
/
ESD
/
F&G Loop and Wiring
Diagrams
,
Instrument
 and I
/
O Schedules, MTO's, Cause and Effect Drawings and other.
Submitted by abdulsattarsyed28 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: