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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities. Other believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #ages #responsibilities #school #life
Every stage of life is considered
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a golden period
of
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 a human being if he takes lessons from
evey
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every
 step.
However
, it has been argued by some people that
children
 of all ages should be responsible.
Thus
, others believe that despite
of
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school load, kids should be free from all kinds of burdens. I think
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 that should be
encoutered
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encountered
 within the choice of
children
. In
this
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i
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 will discuss my notes on
this
 topic and express my views.
Firstly
, according to me, after spending a long day at school some
children
 feel it very
exaustive
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exhaustive
 to take part in
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extra curricular
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 activities. Even though, it offers them a lot of opportunities to open up themselves to different challenges and take a stand
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 them.
For example
- seventy
percentages
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 of
children
 in
USA
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the USA
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 who volunteered themselves in community
workafter
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work after
 school hours got jobs in
diiferent
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different
 high standard fields as
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 to those who have not.
Secondly
, on other hand, Every child has
its
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their
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 own interest.
Hence
, it would not be fair to the
children
 to push them
towards
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 taking
a
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responsibility
about
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 what they are not confident
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 I believe, they should be free to look up their forthcoming life. In conclusion, I think, there is no doubt that
children
 should have responsibility for themselves and their society but forcing them to take over it would not make any difference.
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