What motivates and inspires you? How will you use your experience and strengths in order to contribute to the program and enrich the experiences of your classmates?

The motivation that encourages me to be interested in studying in MSc International Finance program is the impact of money on the individual, organization, and society from the past to the present,
such
as foreign exchange rates, economic situations, and the
interest
rate
.
For example
, the currency appreciation or currency depreciation of each country causes the cost of goods and services in everyday life to adjust
accordingly
. The changes in price give dramatic changes in terms of advantages and disadvantages towards personal expenses.
Moreover
,
this
effect
also
has an impact on each company’s expenses because the company has to use more money for expenses from increasing commodity prices. Increasing commodity prices causes Federal Reserve Bank to increase the
interest
rate
in order to reduce the inflation in the financial system.
However
, the rising
interest
rate
has a negative effect on the firm because they have to pay more loans resulting in the bankruptcy of the firm. When there are a lot of companies considered as default states, the result makes drastically negative changes in the GDP of each country. The impact of lower GDP will accelerate the deflation to occur rapidly. I am confident that if I study
this
program, I can use the knowledge that I get from
this
program to adjust and adapt to the firm.
For instance
, I can analyze when the
interest
rate
will rise or fall, I will be able to make a suggestion to the president of the company at that time on how we should operate the business.
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