Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
The ability to choose has
been risen
as Change to the active voice
risen
the
society became more literate. Though these days some individuals think that Correct article usage
apply
everyone
has too many Use synonyms
choices
. Use synonyms
However
, some Linking Words
people
disagree with Use synonyms
this
idea, so Linking Words
this
has been a subject of debate.
Some groups disagree with Linking Words
this
idea that Linking Words
everyone
can chooseUse synonyms
,
while having strong proof of their word. They believe that poverty can isolate Remove the comma
apply
people
and stop them from making decisions. Use synonyms
Likewise
, poor Linking Words
people
who can not study Use synonyms
in
a good university, because of disability in payments. Change preposition
at
Besides
, some cultural limitations may ban individuals from doing certain tasks. Linking Words
For instance
, in some countries like Linking Words
Afganistan
girls can not study or even come out of their homes.
Correct your spelling
Afghanistan
On the other hand
, those who believe Linking Words
people
have many Use synonyms
choices
these days, believe that technological advancements let Use synonyms
everyone
around the globe connect to the world, and Use synonyms
has
made Correct subject-verb agreement
have
everyone
free to decide Use synonyms
for
their fate. Change preposition
apply
For example
, online educational courses that Linking Words
everyone
can take to change their future. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the number of egalitarian societies is increasing, where Linking Words
people
can choose to be Use synonyms
whoever
they want. Change the pronoun
whomever
Such
as modern communities like the USA, which is a good example of an egalitarian society.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
technological inventions have made many individuals Linking Words
to
make Change the verb form
apply
choices
for their future, Use synonyms
but
certain conditions like poverty stops Remove the conjunction
apply
people
to make decisions freely. In my opinion, many societies are changing, so Use synonyms
people
will be making Use synonyms
choices
more freely as time passes and even poverty will be solved in many regions Use synonyms
and
in the near future.Correct word choice
apply
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